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Imagine this whole thing, every last piece of the sound clip, turned death metal.
Change up the bass.
Change up the distortion.
Equalize it a little louder and sharper.
Make the guitar a little louder especially.
And lookie here; You've got some badass headbanging music.
Just something to think about is all. \m/
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0 - 16 sounds like my printer is broken
17 - 31 is where you can hear what sounds like a robot arm hitting the cymbal
32 - 1:00 sounds like a bunch of guitar clippings edited together
1:00 - 1:08 sounds like you used audacity to change the pitch of the hammer offs
Dude, I love the beat and I love mood it could be giving off, which is why I'm going to say you should get some better equipment. I remember I used to use my built in laptop mic to send friends clips of guitar riffs I wrote and when I listened to them myself, I was like, "Wow... I sound like shit..." and that's what they thought to.
But then, I dumped a little money into some decent equipment and now I'm helping write music for a friend's MMORPG. I haven't gotten better at all, in fact I'm still playing some of the old shit that sounded bad.
Here's good luck with the music. \m/
Author's Response:
Hah! Great review, friend!
The one reason it sounds like shit is our ruined recorder, once again broken.
Don't worry, it'll be fixed in no time!
Also.. what's this about an MMORPG? PM me about this, I'd love to hear about it! =D
-Dan
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My only complaint is that in the beginning I can swear I hear Alvin and the Chipmunks singing from inside a glass box. Now, this might only be me but LOL.
Otherwise it's got a laid back tune to it that sounds like it could be the background music for an exploring game like... Dark Cloud.
Nice work with keeping the beat!
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Earlier this morning, about an hour ago, the bodies of 3,000 dead babies were found within a hidden meth lab behind the local grocer. Eye witnesses say they saw a shady figure coming and going from this house early in the morning around this time. This is Fox News reminding you to keep your doors and windows locked as this suspect is still on the loose. The whereabouts of this man are still unknown but we will try to keep you up to da-EVERYBODY HIT THE FLOOR OR THE LITTLE GIRL GETS IT!!!
dunna nun... nun nun dunna nun... dah dunna nu... dunna nu...~
Just messin' dude. Nice track. 5/5, 10/10
Author's Response:
I was wondering who robbed my orphanage
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I like it, but it could use a bass guitar.
Maybe rhythm guitar.
Nice work, I love the vocal to screaming transitions.
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You, honestly, cannot post something and expect to have everybody believe you immediately. You need some sort of proof. Like sending someone a youtube message from blacklotus007.
Otherwise, you'll just get flamed repeatedly.
HOWEVER, if it really is you then good work. Have a 10.
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My favorite of all your submissions.
I can definitely \m/ to this.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I might have some more like this in store for later. Keep checking in the audio portal and they'll be there :P
Thank you for your review.
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I love heavy metal in general, I don't care how simple or complex the instruments are, as long as I can smash some skulls to it.
But lyrics are something that can cause ruin. Your voice is also an instrument and it's often the main key of music and in that chain of thinking, I'm not a big fan of screaming bands who... just don't know how. Practice up.
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You know I loved it without the vox. It made me want to throw a basket full of babies into a woodchipper to let their blood flow into the goblet of metal like the nile into the ocean.
This time you've added vox, and the song seems unproportional to the instruments. I can't feel the baby slaying buzz anymore. A little equalization tweaking can fix this, though... so no worries.
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When the solo guitar comes in at 26 seconds, see if you can't crank up the distortion for something more soul grabbing. You know what I mean.
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