Score: 8

"Gear Up!"

submission: [HRM Offset] Darkness Falls

date: July 8, 2008

0 - 16 sounds like my printer is broken
17 - 31 is where you can hear what sounds like a robot arm hitting the cymbal
32 - 1:00 sounds like a bunch of guitar clippings edited together
1:00 - 1:08 sounds like you used audacity to change the pitch of the hammer offs

Dude, I love the beat and I love mood it could be giving off, which is why I'm going to say you should get some better equipment. I remember I used to use my built in laptop mic to send friends clips of guitar riffs I wrote and when I listened to them myself, I was like, "Wow... I sound like shit..." and that's what they thought to.

But then, I dumped a little money into some decent equipment and now I'm helping write music for a friend's MMORPG. I haven't gotten better at all, in fact I'm still playing some of the old shit that sounded bad.

Here's good luck with the music. \m/

Score: 10

"Tonight on Fox News..."

submission: RGH: CTSG3

date: July 8, 2008

Earlier this morning, about an hour ago, the bodies of 3,000 dead babies were found within a hidden meth lab behind the local grocer. Eye witnesses say they saw a shady figure coming and going from this house early in the morning around this time. This is Fox News reminding you to keep your doors and windows locked as this suspect is still on the loose. The whereabouts of this man are still unknown but we will try to keep you up to da-EVERYBODY HIT THE FLOOR OR THE LITTLE GIRL GETS IT!!!

dunna nun... nun nun dunna nun... dah dunna nu... dunna nu...~

Just messin' dude. Nice track. 5/5, 10/10

Score: 10

"Oh, yes."

submission: Bloody Soil

date: July 6, 2008

My favorite of all your submissions.

I can definitely \m/ to this.

Score: 9

"I'm back."

submission: Death by bear (w/vox)

date: July 6, 2008

You know I loved it without the vox. It made me want to throw a basket full of babies into a woodchipper to let their blood flow into the goblet of metal like the nile into the ocean.

This time you've added vox, and the song seems unproportional to the instruments. I can't feel the baby slaying buzz anymore. A little equalization tweaking can fix this, though... so no worries.

Score: 9

"Nice."

submission: Soiled

date: July 6, 2008

I just Soiled myself.
\m/

Score: 5

"Unrefined."

submission: High Play

date: May 11, 2008

You've got a little bit of talent there, but you need to learn how to mix it all together to get the flow going.

Think of it as music making a storyline.

By the way, you're and idiot for smoking the ganja.

Score: 6

"A Song With a Message"

submission: Death by bear (w/o vox)

date: May 10, 2008

And that message is, "Day of Armageddon."

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